One day not long ago my sister called me in tears of sheer panic. It turned out she was taking a course with .which she was having problems. It was a subject that was difficult for me to help her with from long distance, so I asked her, "Have you utilized your resources?"
This is also true for writers. I think most writers have or will at some time have something or someone they know nothing about, and it can be very difficult to write about that thing or person with some basic knowledge. You run the risk of being unconvincing. For instance, your leading character is a lawyer. That fact may not really have any impact on your story, but lawyers do have a certain way of thinking, a certain way of talking. That needs to come through in order for your character to b convincing. But you are not a lawyer so it is necessary to research him or her.What do you do?
Look around you. Look to see what resources you have available to you. There could be a neighbor or someone in your church who is a lawyer. Or you could go sit in on a trial at your local courthouse. Observe their characteristics, how they talk, even (if possible) what their interests are. There may be certain phrases they use frequently, or a particular motion of their hand they do when they talk. Do they have the habit of looking past you or directly at you when speaking to you? Is their voice strong, firm, confident, or hesitant?
Look at the resources available to you and use them. Build your character from the real thing. If it is something like a special type of car, go to the library or even to the dealership and learn about the good and the bad points of that car. There may be a little quirk about that car that you can use to make the one in your story seem special or (no laughing here) have character/personality. It may have the habit of choking down at the oddest time, causing your character some aggravation or to add some humor at a point in your story that works for you.
You may be amazed at how many resources you have around you that are just waiting for you to take advantage of them.
Faye M. Tollison
Author of: To Tell the Truth
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Sarah's Secret
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Writing and Assessment
Quality assessment is now one of the most important strategies in education. Good assessment techniques are in play from the start of every course or project undertaken by students. And the intention behind this is to promote learning rather than to demoralise by testing before a student is ready.
To explore what benefits this could bring to writers, consider the methods of assessment commonly in use and see how some might help improve technique and time management.
Decide on the Criteria.
This may be self assessment but we need standards to aim for, standards to attain.
Goal setting for writers usually focuses on words per day. If the focus is moved to the standards you want your book to reach, you can create SMART targets (specific, measurable, attainable, realistic and time-bound) to ensure improvement scene by scene, chapter by chapter, book by book.
The SMART target could be to cut down subject-verb sentences by two per chapter.
Try varying sentence structure till it becomes automatic not to start too many sentences with he did, she did subject-verb sentences.
I'm a participle starter...love my -ings lol. Realising this is one of my many defects, I try not to do it too often. Let's hope that's the last example in this blog.
Yes, writing tricks and habits may be part of your author's voice, but repeated too often they bore the reader through familiarity.
How many authors did you once love but now don't follow? Ask yourself why.
Question and Answer
Fiction writers use question Q&A from the start when creating their characters' biographies, when asking "what if....?" to move their plot points forward.
In the main, the questions are closed--asking and expecting straightforward answers...Where was the hero born? What is the inciting incident?
But if you read through the day's work and ask more open-ended questions, then stronger solutions may appear.
What is the underlying theme of the scene? And make no mistake, each scene should be locking on to one of the themes of your book.
What other possible outcomes could there be? Take time. Ensure you have the best possible outcome.
How is this scene similar to the ones before? Vary the scenario,vary the emotional tempo, the pacing if you like. Vary the outcome to give an unexpected player the upper hand.
Key Principles
With so many e-books now outsourced to ghostwriters, your book will have the advantage of authenticity. If you've adhered to your self-imposed targets, it will be valid in assessment terms. But is it sufficient?
In education-speak, this means it covers all the assessment criteria. In reader-speak, this means it tells the story, the whole story and nothing but the story.
In today's fast-read world, there is no advantage to padding out books unnecessarily. Prune viciously. Harlequin and many other romance publishers look for novels around 55,000 words. They're still in business. They know what sells.
Anne Duguid is a senior content editor with MuseItUp Publishing and her New Year's Resolution was to blog with helpful writing,editing and publishing tips at Slow and Steady Writers far more regularly than she managed in 2011. Could do better--much better. :-(
Prepping for NaNoWriMo
The Muse Online Writers Conference recently ended. There
were many workshops to choose from to help you be a better writer. The workshops were also helpful for NaNoWriMo participants. Some of these
workshops included topics such as: research, dialogue, characters, tension,
creating fantasy worlds, and point of
view. (Mark your calendar for next year’s conference, which is October 7-13. http://themuseonlinewritersconference.com/)
Some of the things I have been doing to get ready for NaNoWriMo:
-Writing down ideas for my novel/outlining for my novel/outlining
-Cutting photos from magazines
-Downloading lists and forms from various writing websites
-Downloading novel writing software
-Talking to my writers group
-Stocking up on food, beverages, and lots of chocolate
-Making homemade meals to fill the freezer
-Perusing books on fiction writing
I also have a zippered binder filled with paper, pockets,
dividers, etc., where I keep hard copies of anything I want to save. It’s my story bible (something I learned at
the Muse Online Writers Conference last year).
Will I make the 50K word minimum before the deadline? Will I
survive NaNoWriMo? Will I write a best-selling novel?
How about you?
What are you doing to prepare for NaNoWriMo?
Debbie A. Byrne has a B.S. in Mass Communication with a
minor in History. She is a member of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and
Illustrators (SCBWI) and is currently working on her first children’s book.
Writing Rituals: An Invitation to Your Muse
I recently taught a week long online workshop on writer’s
block. I asked the participants to share
their writing rituals. I was surprised (though
I probably shouldn't have been) by the number of writers who sit down at their
computers to write and first check their email and Facebook. Responding to your emails and checking Facebook before you write is not a ritual--it is a routine.
A writing ritual is a type of ceremony or rite. It helps facilitate the transition between
your everyday life and your writing life.
It is a specific set of activities designed to signal your subconscious that
this is a special time set aside just for writing. It is a call to your muse. It might be
ringing a bell, putting on soft music, or saying a prayer. It does not have to
be elaborate, but it should be something done with intent.
My ritual includes a short meditation and filling my writing
coffee cup—my “Do North” coffee cup. So,
as I sip my coffee out of my DO North mug, I embrace the action or the Doing of
my true North and then I start to write.
It’s simple and quick, but helps me slip into the writer in me.
Do you have a writing ritual or is it a routine? I’d love to hear how you start your writing
sessions.
Mary Jo Guglielmo is writer and
intuitive life strategist. She helps clients take the action to live their true north.
For more information check out www.donorth.biz
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Watch Out for the U-Turn!
How can I describe the experience?
It was like when you are tearing along the road, enjoying the scenery and eager to arrive at your destination, and all of a sudden the road turns back on itself. You jam on brakes and grip the steering wheel in an effort to keep the car under control as you attempt to navigate the U-turn you hadn't seen coming.
It was like when you are tearing along the road, enjoying the scenery and eager to arrive at your destination, and all of a sudden the road turns back on itself. You jam on brakes and grip the steering wheel in an effort to keep the car under control as you attempt to navigate the U-turn you hadn't seen coming.
It was just like that.
I jammed on brakes, gripped my steering wheel, and sped into battle against what turned out to be an aggressive form of cancer. With the use of a skilled surgeon, an unconventional and courageous oncologist, a supportive family, and a team of praying friends, God pulled me through that dreadful year of treatment. Not only did I survive the U-turn, I found myself traveling, as you do with a U-turn, in a different direction. I went from being an RN to being a published author.
Near the beginning of treatment, I picked up an old notebook and started to journal. Not logically or neatly. No edits. No proper sentences. I just jotted down the good times (few) and the bad times (many). I didn't know why, but I knew that God promises in His Word He will work all things for the good of those who love him. (Romans 8:28). I couldn't see how He could do this, and I also knew that where He would probably remember the important facts, I probably would not. So I took notes.
It took me a while to see it. But I began to realise how many invaluable lessons God was teaching me during my "cancer year," and eventually I started to make notes of them as well.
One verse that followed me throughout the whole cancer experience is found in Isaiah 40:31: "They that wait upon the LORD shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings as eagles." I started to put my meditations together under the working title, Rise and Soar over the Cancer Valley, based on the picture of the eagle soaring on his strong wings.
I knew my only option for publication was to get the book to an American publisher--but how?
I knew my only option for publication was to get the book to an American publisher--but how?
Then unexpectedly I received the incredible gift of a trip to the Florida Christian Writers' Conference in 2010. (If you think that's great, add on the fact that I live in South Africa!) There was one editor I knew wouldn't be interested in my book, but she was. You'll need to read the full story if you want to know more! She wasn't only interested. She took it to Revell Books, a division of the well-known Baker Publishing group, and they bought my book.
Fast track to 2012. On October 1, Strength Renewed, Meditations for Your Journey through Breast Cancer was launched. It is now available in the U.S. and on-line and will be released here in Southern Africa on November 10.
It all goes to show that anything--absolutely anything-- can be of value to a writer--provided we remember the facts. Oh yes, and God can use all things for good!
So when life's highway suddenly throws unexpected twists and turns at you, hang onto that steering wheel. And don't forget to journal as you navigate the U-turn ahead!
OVER TO YOU: What U-Turn have you had to navigate in your life? Are you still going in the new direction?
Further Reading:
The Right Editor!
Florida Christian Writers Conference
Visit Shirley on her website to inspire and encourage writers, or on Rise and Soar, her website for encouraging those on the cancer journey. Follow her on Twitter or "like" her Author's page on Facebook.
How to Choose the Right Editor
From a
reader’s and reviewer’s point-of-view, books need a professional editor.
Why do books
need a professional editor?
Authors are
too close to the project to be able to pick up everything, especially if the
author is self-publishing their book. Self-editing doesn’t work; many books and
author’s sites have errors in grammar and punctuation as books and a web site
visited today.
How to
choose the right one to work with
- Authors need to talk with, and ask questions of the editor they choose to work with to see if the read and understand the genre of your book
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Have
they edited in the genre?
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Can
you and the editor work together?
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Will
the editor accept your input?
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Are
they willing to keep you abreast of how the project is progressing?
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Does
the editor have an estimate of how long it will take to edit?
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Can
you agree on a price that is acceptable to both parties?
- The editor should send the author an edited copy for review/proofread.
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The
final say is the author’s responsibility.
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The
editor shouldn’t have changed, but strengthened the sentences.
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The
editor should have corrected any grammar or punctuation errors.
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The
editor should have used Word’s Track Changes.
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Any
questions the editor has should be addressed using Word’s Comment feature.
- After the edited copy is proofread by the author:
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The
author and editor should agree on the changes.
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If
the editor suggested a word change, the author and editor should agree.
·
Talking
with the editor should be like talking to a friend helping your book be the
best it can be.
·
Once
the final edits are completed and both parties are satisfied, then the final
edited copy is ready for publication.
There should never be harsh feelings about your book with an
editor; the editor is there to help the author create a book that is the best
copy possible.
Readers deserve the best book authors and editors are capable
of creating. From an ethical standpoint, authors need to offer only their best
to their readers.
Robert Medak
Freelance Writer/Blogger/Editor/Proofreader/Reviewer/Marketer
Planning for Success
We are having a big family reunion this weekend to coincide with our son's wedding and our house-warming in our new home. The relocation itself took almost 2 years to plan as we searched for the right location and the right home.The planning for a successful and stress free family gathering has been in the works for over 3 months.
In the process of trying to plan a successful family gathering it occurred to me that it is similar to the writing process. There are certain steps that I take in planning any big event that I want to turn out so why wouldn't the process work for a successful writing career.
First, I researched. Research included looking at properties, schools, churches, shopping etc for the relocation and it was detailed. I took notes, made calls, read whatever I could get my hands on, and talked in person with the people who knew what I needed to know. Writing articles, books, poems, or cartoons deserves the same research for market, style, topic, ideas, and anything else that would make the piece reach the heart of the reader. In essence, research is the first part of the writing process.
The next part of the writing process is the planning stage where you lay out all the research and start making decisions about which information is essential and which parts of the research can be kept on hold. Planning is part of any successful action whether it is planning a party or planning an article.
Implementing the plan is when you get down and dirty with action steps that make the plan go from a plan into an event or end product. You clean and cook preparing for guests, you write (cook) your words and then you revise (clean and polish) to prepare your manuscript.
At different stages of any action plan you must take time to assess. The assessment gives you the information you need get the project or event just right. Planning a party or planning a book takes the same assessment at different times to make sure you are still on track. Take a look at what can be added to make your writing piece shine or maybe what you can delete.
Evaluation is the last step. In my case, we will hope the guests have a good time, no one is hurt or sick, and that the house is still standing after three nights of campfires, cookouts, and a wedding. In the case of your writing your hope should be personal pride and satisfaction in a job well done and of course the ultimate goal of publication. You want to reach your readers with a product they love.
It seems that when things don't go as planned we deem the project a failure but in fact it is all part of a learning and growing process. In the case of a party or event, changes can be made for the next time. Maybe less cooking, more relaxing, and fewer expectations. In the case of your writing projects, a revision can change things and make your story or article a success. Killing the character or changing the focus of a piece can be just the right thing. And sometimes the piece is perfect just the way it is but the target audience may need to change. It may take you back to the research step but then you continue with the process until you succeed.
No matter what you do in life, it seems planning will lead to success if you follow the steps and listen to your heart. Don't bypass the research or short change the process and expect success. All successes take a plan and planning is hard work. What is your plan for success?
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